The act of crafting a great beginning sends many writers to
Google, Facebook, Netflix, Amazon Prime and/or the bottle for answers, or a way
to procrastinate. Personally, I Googled how to begin a novel so I could begin
this blog post about how to begin writing.
The answer? There is no perfect way to begin. There are many
ways to craft a beginning, and each rule or strategy has its merits, but every
writer has to find his or her own way depending on the piece. However, I did
learn that writing a great beginning can be difficult, intimidating and
frustrating.
Regardless of whether we follow the rules or break them, the
way a writer begins a book, article or a blogpost gives the readers a path in
to the world he or she created. In the speech class I teach, it's called an attention-getter;
and in journalism, the lead (or lede) or hook. Regardless, each is a strategy
designed as a preview of what's to come. Each word, line and paragraph work
together to encourage the reader to continue. A great beginning creates desire.
A great beginning creates the need to find out what happens, or explore the "what
if?" A great beginning is essential.
That's a lot of pressure.
While watching a cooking show, I started to think about how
the chef began the process. There were lots of utensils, equipment and
ingredients scattered about. But if you go back before the the process began,
the ingredients and equipment were scattered about a store, and before that,
possibly scattered around the world. And before that, maybe the chef was a kid
who grew tired of plain old macaroni and cheese and wanted to switch it up. So
how do all these factors come together? With time, patience and desire to
create something wonderful.
Every chef knows that his or her mac and cheese is not like
anyone else's, and that's what makes the world an interesting place. And the
recipe has probably changed from the first effort, and maybe quite a few times.
What's right for one chef may not be right for another.
So when readers enter a world that may be self-contained, or
spread out like the ingredients in a great dish, the writer has to find the
right way in. He or she needs to guide us through the one door that will take
us right to the heart of the story, and make it clear and interesting while
asking questions and presenting options. The effort to begin the story effectively
may be long and difficult, or maybe not. Maybe the simple blue box of macaroni
and cheese is the secret comfort food your favorite chef craves, and that's OK.
Here's how authors began a few of my favorite books:
"Four hours out from Los Angeles I drove into
nothingness."
Jory
Sherman, from The Ballad of Pinewood Lake
Mitch
Albom, from The Five People You Meet in Heaven
"Begin here. It was raining."
May Sarton,
from Journal of a Solitude
"Jack is the church I have joined, but he is a church
without ceremony."
Martha
Bergland, from A Farm Under a Lake
So I've learned that it doesn't matter how we find our way
in, but that we are more likely to find the way that speaks to us. And the
rules are followed, and they aren't, and sometimes the method that should work
doesn't, and what shouldn't work does. Why? Because writing, like life, is
complex and difficult and we all have a unique perspective, just like a favorite
macaroni and cheese recipe.
Write soon,
Mary
